This poem I'm still working on, too. Especially the ending, I can't figure out how to end it! I wouldn't mind a little help, though ;)
Tick Tock, Tick Tock
It's quite a shock
To see we're locked
In time and clocks
Tick Tock, Tick Tick
Hand's constant flick
But don't be tricked
There's change in clicks
Joy is fleeting
Sorrow's staying
Life's great timing?
Dissapointing
Tick Tock, Tick tock
Oh what a shock
We've got us locked
In time and clocks
*What do we think? Good? Bad? BE HONEST!*
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I REALLY like this one! =D Can't wait to see what else you post on here........
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